The Objective

Email Optimization Project

This project showcases my ability to review and revise workplace communications by providing feedback, editing an email using tracked changes, and creating a clearer, audience-focused rewritten version. It highlights my communication skills, attention to detail, and professionalism in workplace interactions.

  • 1) REVISE

    Using Word’s Comment and Track Changes, I reviewed Ms. Shi’s draft email, suggesting tone adjustments, clarity improvements, and grammar corrections to make the message more professional and effective.

  • 2) REWRITE

    I revised the original email to better suit the audience, streamlining the message, removing unnecessary details, and emphasizing key points for clarity and professionalism.

  • 3) EMAIL

    I rewrote an email reply to Ms. Shi, outlining the changes I made to her draft. The response highlighted improvements in clarity, tone, and organization, ensuring the revised email was professional, concise, and aligned with the intended purpose.

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The Objective

Data Tracking Project

This project showcases the ability to effectively manage and interpret data by collecting relevant information, organizing it into a structured and coherent format, creating clear and impactful visualizations, and deriving actionable insights or conclusions that highlight data-driven decision-making skills.

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The Objective

Team Presentation Project

This project showcases the ability to effectively manage and interpret data by collecting relevant information, organizing it into a structured and coherent format, creating clear and impactful visualizations, and deriving actionable insights or conclusions that highlight data-driven decision-making skills.

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